We received both positive and negative feedback about our first draft of 'Love Triangle'. We had only started editing a little bit of the title sequence when this was presented and so could only get feedback on this part of the film which did not include the opening part of our film. Our feedback was quite broad as we had done so little towards completing the film.
Positive Feedback:
- The music we had selected was very appropriate to the teen angst genre.
- Mise en Scene was good and fittted the genre Eg. make up, headphones, pink colours
- Good range of shots, (close up, mid shot, long shot, extreme close up)
- Title font and style were appropriate.
- Over the shoulder shot was particularly effective
Negative Feedback
- Lighting outside is dark, so not realistic to the character leaving for school
- The character's facial expression and body language does not show that she is happy
- Quicker editing of the shots so it flows better
- Incorporate the title into the title sequence better.
- No voice over
- Needs different transitions
Some of these feedback points were due to the fact that we hadn't finished the title sequences and film opening for example, the voice over and incorporating the title in the film. However we took these points and used them to improve our film to make it the best we could. This included re-filming and editing the whole opening and title sequence again (because it was dark outside).
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